Re: My Little Genchat #1: The Ice Man Cometh

by -mazer Sun Apr 22, 2012 7:13 pm

Klonoahedgehog wrote:Hey guys, i'm writing my fanfic now and i want one of you guy's opinion, how is this coming along?
"Oh i sleep't like a rock last night, oh my aching back" muttered Rarity,
"Well that's what happens when you don't want to sleep on the cold, dirty floor" said Salamon.

The Digidestined and the Digimon were walking along a cliffside road beside the a big forest which is a path to Canterlot castle when Twilight said "Hey SpikeAgumon are you sure this path is safe? One of us could fall into that forest if were not careful." and SpikeAgumon replied "Don't worry Twi, this path is perfectly safe, Digimon go by here all the time, just trust me!"
"Heh, felling a little chicken aren't we Twilight?" Twilight looked back and saw Rainbow mocking her with her arms crossed behind her neck, "I'm not scared!, i was just asking a question!" yelled Twilight.

"Yeah sure" said Rainbow in a sarcastic voice as she walked passed Twilight as she said "She's so annoying." as Applejack walked by saying "Ya get used to it after a while."

All Twilight did was pout as she started walking again only to hear a sound, it was a craking noise a part of the ground she was standing on broke apart as she was about to fall "Oh no!" she yelled, but before she could fall down Applejack caught her.

"Don't worry, i got ya." She said, Twilight was just staring down that steep hill and gulped, SpikeAgumon walked over to Twilight and said "Are you okay?" "That....was a close one." said Twilight.

"We better be more careful, that down there is the Everfree forest, i hear that people who fall in there have never come out to tell the tale." said Gaomon

Listening to One Piece music really gets me in the writing mood by the way.

These sentences need work as they don't read smoothly. I would offer an example if my brain wasn't mush from just waking up. Also remember to capitalize the proper words.

by DoctorWhoMe Sun Apr 22, 2012 8:15 pm

GasmaskGamer wrote:How do you even play those games? I could hardly throw a hadouken half the time on SSF4 on the 3DS.

Do you have to buy one of those arcade stick thingies to be any good at it?

I think that's a pretty common problem among Capcom's design philosophy with fighting games. They don't teach newcomers how do basic shit like quarter circles. This "<--- --->"(move backwards for three seconds, and smash forward while simultaneously pressing any attack button)doesn't make sense to anybody not familiar with traditional fighting games, and they don't really explain the motion. I think if they just found a better way to communicate these concepts to new comers, more of them would be able to play it.

by sBastiZH Sun Apr 22, 2012 8:44 pm

I actually found the symbols in the manual pretty self explanatory when I played it for the first time :/
I will agree though that the few tutorials that are there aren't exactly detailed.

by Klonoahedgehog Sun Apr 22, 2012 8:47 pm

-mazer wrote:
Klonoahedgehog wrote:Hey guys, i'm writing my fanfic now and i want one of you guy's opinion, how is this coming along?
"Oh i sleep't like a rock last night, oh my aching back" muttered Rarity,
"Well that's what happens when you don't want to sleep on the cold, dirty floor" said Salamon.

The Digidestined and the Digimon were walking along a cliffside road beside the a big forest which is a path to Canterlot castle when Twilight said "Hey SpikeAgumon are you sure this path is safe? One of us could fall into that forest if were not careful." and SpikeAgumon replied "Don't worry Twi, this path is perfectly safe, Digimon go by here all the time, just trust me!"
"Heh, felling a little chicken aren't we Twilight?" Twilight looked back and saw Rainbow mocking her with her arms crossed behind her neck, "I'm not scared!, i was just asking a question!" yelled Twilight.

"Yeah sure" said Rainbow in a sarcastic voice as she walked passed Twilight as she said "She's so annoying." as Applejack walked by saying "Ya get used to it after a while."

All Twilight did was pout as she started walking again only to hear a sound, it was a craking noise a part of the ground she was standing on broke apart as she was about to fall "Oh no!" she yelled, but before she could fall down Applejack caught her.

"Don't worry, i got ya." She said, Twilight was just staring down that steep hill and gulped, SpikeAgumon walked over to Twilight and said "Are you okay?" "That....was a close one." said Twilight.

"We better be more careful, that down there is the Everfree forest, i hear that people who fall in there have never come out to tell the tale." said Gaomon

Listening to One Piece music really gets me in the writing mood by the way.

These sentences need work as they don't read smoothly. I would offer an example if my brain wasn't mush from just waking up. Also remember to capitalize the proper words.

Thanks, i could use tips for grammar, my first language isn't English but nobody believes me when i say it. Mad

by sBastiZH Sun Apr 22, 2012 9:47 pm

Uuuuh... almost 3 AM once again.
Night everypony.

by **GasmaskGamer** Sun Apr 22, 2012 10:46 pm

sBastiZH wrote:Uuuuh... almost 3 AM once again.
Night everypony.

Sleep tight.

by Klonoahedgehog Mon Apr 23, 2012 3:47 pm

I don't know if this should go in the Episode discussion thread but my god, today i found out that the guy who voiced Shining Armor also voiced two of my favorite characters in anime, Billy in Transformers and Megaman in the Battle Network anime, he was also Vert Wheeler in Hot Wheels.

New best pony everyone! *Slow clap*
Excuse me guys im off to draw Shining Armor cosplaying as Megaman.

by Maffi Mon Apr 23, 2012 7:41 pm

soooo goddamn tired, i want this semester to end already so i can GRADUATE

by Klonoahedgehog Mon Apr 23, 2012 8:02 pm

Maffi wrote:soooo goddamn tired, i want this semester to end already so i can GRADUATE

My Little Genchat #1: The Ice Man Cometh - Page 11 Nelson_muntz_ha_ha

My classes end at the start of next month!
I can spend more time writing my comics and fanfic! Very Happy

by **GasmaskGamer** Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:18 pm

Hmm...

(Apparently this doesn't perform the redirect for Internet Explorer, but I'm not going to make exceptions for people using inferior browser-ware.)

by Klonoahedgehog Mon Apr 23, 2012 9:41 pm

Has anyone here ever wanted to do something that they lack the skill and patience to do? Yeah that happens to me alot.
Sad

For me it's wanting to make flash animations and make one like this with characters from my fanfic.

Spoiler:

by Wolf Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:02 pm

^ I know that feel bro.

by sBastiZH Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:10 pm

Klonoahedgehog wrote:Has anyone here ever wanted to do something that they lack the skill and patience to do? Yeah that happens to me alot.

All the time. Mostly because I'm lazy as fuck.

And once again, 3AM. My diurnal rhythm is completely fucked again.
Night everypony.

by DoctorWhoMe Mon Apr 23, 2012 10:45 pm

Gotta post this in the new forums.
Epic Wub Time: Musicians of Ponyville
This is the kind of stuff that makes me want to buy flash.

by Maffi Mon Apr 23, 2012 11:56 pm

Klonoahedgehog wrote:Has anyone here ever wanted to do something that they lack the skill and patience to do?

yeah, for me it's called "not suck at fighting games"

by FearlessSasuke Tue Apr 24, 2012 12:03 am

Klonoahedgehog wrote:Has anyone here ever wanted to do something that they lack the skill and patience to do? Yeah that happens to me alot.

For me its trying to draw on that tablet I bought Disapproving

Maffi wrote:but Bolin at least has a personality

Yea but Mako really reminds me alot of Zuko, one of my favorite characters from last season.

DoctorWhoMe wrote:Gotta post this in the new forums.
Epic Wub Time: Musicians of Ponyville
This is the kind of stuff that makes me want to buy flash.

This is really awesome, the things this fandom does amazes me.

by **GasmaskGamer** Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:06 pm

PC Gaming

by sBastiZH Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:20 pm

GasmaskGamer wrote:PC Gaming

Holy shit, I NEED THIS!

by Santeco Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:43 pm

sBastiZH wrote:
GasmaskGamer wrote:PC Gaming
Holy shit, I NEED THIS!

god i luv reading the comments for those games

by Chronos Tue Apr 24, 2012 7:44 pm

GasmaskGamer wrote:PC Gaming

Aw fuck yeah!

by FearlessSasuke Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:34 pm

GasmaskGamer wrote:PC Gaming

Game of the Year, calling it right now.

by sBastiZH Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:41 pm

by **GasmaskGamer** Tue Apr 24, 2012 8:51 pm

sBastiZH wrote:Related

I lost interest in the series after they took out kill streaks.

by Maffi Wed Apr 25, 2012 4:24 pm

LAST WEEK OF CLASSES IS OFFICIALLY OVER, I only have one last class scheduled next monday (because my professor is dumb and thought there was one more week of classes than actually exists) and then finals and then I will be at COMMENCEMENT because I will be GRADUATING and DONE WITH SCHOOL FOREVE-oh wait grad school Fuuuuuuuuck.

by Necromagenvion Wed Apr 25, 2012 5:01 pm

I'm so tired I could sleep twenty four hours.

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